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-:¦:- Fanfic Reviews
 I've had so many wonderful reviews and frankly I've been nothing short of blown away by the kind comments. I started out writing this story mainly for myself (because I'm a sap and couldn't leave the twins with an ending like the one they had), so I'm always surprised that people read it at all, let alone enjoy it. Anyways, here are a handful of the very much appreciated comments and crits I've recieved for the story.
Ponytail Goddess
2007-11-12 . chapter 11
Creepy. I love your fic, p.s., by the way. The interaction between Nox and Fred is splendid and tasteful and when you get George and Fred together, you give them real chemistry (though not in a twincesty way, which I am thankful for). I love it! Your Luna is great too. I didn't think I'd like this fic when I started it but now I'm terribly hooked! I hope you update soon!
-P.G.
Carcassonne
2007-11-22 . chapter 11
Wow! I really love your stories. This is a wonderful one and I hardly can't await the next update! Fred and George are my all-time favourites and Luna is also a fantastic character.
You're story is the exactly mixture of humor, horror, a little bit of romance and sadness. I hope you update very soon. Best greetings, Carcassonne.
Kristen
2008-02-15 . chapter 1
You are amazing. I have read pretty much all your HP fics and let me tell you that I am not just addicted, I am OBSESSED! You truly do have a marvelous writing talent and very original plot lines. Your OC Nox is just beyond comprehension with how well you have written her! She is normal, not quite pretty, teased and just regular. That appeals to me so much you have no idea! I have been looking for stories like yours (non-MarySue OC, great dialogue, amazing characterizations and Fred Weasley LOVE) for so long that I can hardly believe I have found this one. Thank you, and as a favour to your brand new (and now VERY loyal) fan, you need to update!
Hugs, Kristen
Greensl33ves
2008-02-10 . chapter 2
'George leered at her, that same Cheshire Cat look which sent shivers up her spine. “I know what I said.”'
I swear that line gave me shivers too. This is such a cool story! I've always wanted to write an FG action/adventure story but I've never even seen one to read, yet here it is and it's brilliant! I cannot wait to read the next chapter! This fic is like the best of JK combined with the best of Alice in Wonderland and made scary and dark and wonderful. :D :D :D
Asta Amkis
2008-05-06 . chapter 18
Hey :)! Don't be so insecure about your writing, I love it! I'm actually a really big fan of George and Luna together and I was just looking for some fanfic on them when I found yours. It's really good! Your writing style is very fun, and good to read! I'm really curious what's going to be the case this time and when we're going to see that snow queen! Also wonder what Luna is gonna do about that fiance of hers.. I hope she realizes a marriage without love is bad! Something must've happened before between her and George right? I'll keep checking the other story as well! Nox is a very good main character as well, and she's a bit like me on some parts (the clumsy parts :D). Well, hope you update quickly :)!
psquare
2008-06-16 . chapter 18
This is for the 17th and the 18th chapters:
Ah, the confusion escalates! The plot -- to me, at least -- seems to be sprouting new tentacles every other chapter, reaching into newer places, pointing at newer characters. Not that I'm complaining, mind. It just gives me, and others equally as lucky, a lot more to look forward to.
The third casebook has looked promising, so far. Voldy finally gets a mention, and Viktor seems interesting! Throw in Lestrange and goblin, werewolf and castle, and some nefarious scheme, and you've got a case that's looking extremely intriguing.
Captain Moody was utterly *hilarious*. I *loved* that part. Have I ever told you that you write humour remarkably well? While traditional whodunits might not exactly be up your alley, you write fantasy and humour very, very well. Hopefully, Moody will have a role to play later in the story, as well.
The twins were as funny as ever (the pillow-fight had me rolling off the *bed* with laughter), Nox is getting further insight into the twins' world, Luna's back, and hey -- so is Malfoy! Hm. I wonder where you're taking this...
PLUS, I just finished reading what you've got of "Hell's Bells" and Caithion... well. He just got doubly interesting.
The research that you've put into this is tremendous. Staggering. Brings a sheen of admiration to the eye and a blush of shame to the cheek, it does...
I'm sorry for the stop-start nature of this review, but I'm really being squeezed for time here. But come 19th chapter, and I have a feeling that I'll have a whole lot more to say...
Take care, and Keep Writing!
Aniay
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Ok so I've red it, cover to cover and I'm speechless. You have a great tallent for writing. You portray characters so well that they come alive in my head. Your twins ar very IC and I know it's hard to write all this bickering and jokes and generally hold work-derived character IC.
You managed to hold the same very high level of writing and interesting-ness of this fic and it almost literaly sucked me into history you created.
I like Nox, she is very well balanced character, and I completly LOVE your adorable Luna. I love the Weasley mansion, in the first chapter it resembles "Mr. Blots Academy"(Akademia pana Kleksa) a Polish fairytale.
You write mystery very well.
When I was throug reading, it came to my mind that you could change some names and It would make perfect book ^_^
So summing up I loved the fic and I'm waiting for next chapters which I hope will emerge soon (unless you want to be chained to your pc)and even though I prefer slashy pairings (In my world Fred and George doesn't finding others to date XP) I really like the Idea of your pairings and i have to admitt that Nox and Fred are perfect for eachother. So keep it up! You are doing good work here!
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